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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was something! It was realistic, even with the weird ending( O_o ) I enjoyed it.^^
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why is this posted on adultfanfiction.net? It's too weak to be here.
Anyway, it's a pretty cool fanfic.
Anyway, it's a pretty cool fanfic.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! hehehe, I lliked how you wrote Toshiya.
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very Very good. the ending was odd but the oddity and the mood of it all really suited the story! i really enjoyd reading this one. i have only read a few kyo/totchi stories and most are all sex sex sex but this had feeling and the song added real "umph" *thumbs UP*
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is actually the third time I've read this fic. ^^;; Twice on another site, and now. Ano...at least I can review it now! ^_^ When I got into DeG fanfiction, this was the first fic I read; I guess that's why I like this pairing uch uch (but don't get me wrong; I love Kaoru/Toshiya too). Personally, I think you did a really good job with the characterization, as well as everything else. I luff this fic! ^_^
Keep up the good work! If you post anymore DeG fics, I'll definitely read them ^-^
~StrawberryPocky
Keep up the good work! If you post anymore DeG fics, I'll definitely read them ^-^
~StrawberryPocky