rate_review Reviews

hello,
i just wanted everyone to know that i've created 2 visuals for my story. since remy is a comic book character, i took creative licence with him and his looks. the end result is that he looks an awful lot like johnny depp. anyway i had fun with these and i hope the links works.
http://www.oddworldz.com/ziloroze/BloodyBoys%20(text).JPG
and
http://www.oddworldz.com/ziloroze/RemyMarshBLUE(text).JPG

I hate slash stories that are just porn without a plot. Especially if it concerns Marshall. I really hate those. I'm thankful that this story is not like that. I love the development of the characters. I fell in love with Marshall all over again after reading this. This is the first time I've heard of Remy LeBeau and I fell in love with him, too. Please write more.

it's not working for me! i dunno what i'm doing wrong. i need to see this, damn!

uhmmm... is Remy sorta saying goodbye to his Lil' M? y'know, it's like, "You gotta be ready bse wse when I'm gone...". Please don't say that it is coz fuck, I can't handle that. that'll be like, too sad. I like this story so much and i don't think i can handle a sad twist (overreacting much?).

"*AN: not a very smushy kiss and make up chapter, but no worries, some smush is on the way :) thanks for the feedback karen & benzoyl... it really makes me work more, knowing someone's interested :)"


--> No problem. You deserve every kudos.

And Yes, please bring on the smush!

love, love, LOVE the latest chapter. Remy's forgiven. You should write more. ;)

LIL' M.!!! hee! training marshall? admit it remy, u've fallen. fallen hard! he doesn't want anything bad happening to his lil' m *g* remy's so cute. i'm in a fit of giggles!

where's my smus



hee!

saw this on d Em slash list and i was so glad to eadieading something new and original for a change.

saw ur comment on d latest chapter and i must say, PLEASE bring on the smush! oh and that Friends of Humanity shit? That shit's making me nervous. I hope they don't cause that much fucked up shit on our 2 heroes.

good job, keep it up.

I've been reading this story for some time now and finally I had the guts to write a comment on it. I cannot express enough how much I love this story. I once had this group project and we interviewed inmates. We had the privelege of interviewing a 'punk' and a 'jocker' and I must say that you totally did justice to the characters. I just love Remy and Marshall's growing relationship in this story. It gives me this fuzzy feeling. After reading chapter 9, I do hope that Remy'll make amends.

Keep up the good work.

BTW, I was also laughing my ass off on Marshall being too ADD to read. I remembered this interview where someone said that Marshall's mom put Marshall on Ritalin because she thought he was.

I can't wait for the next installment to this story.

woohooo! chapter 9 already! can't stop reading this ish. MORE please *kneels and pleads*

and as for Remy? bastard! he needs his empath powers back. for sure. :)

again, MORE PLEASE!

just wanna say that this story is probably d best i've read in... well... months! for r i i luv d build up of this story. d suspense is really killing me. oh and, em and gambit? sheer genius. u fuckin rock, zilo! keep it up. cant wait to see what'll happen next. don't keep us hanging that long, ok?