rate_review Reviews

Hey I'm a "lost reader" from FF.NET. So glad I found it again.
The most, unusual, original, heartbreaking story I've ever read. Slash or other. I miss it already.

On the first few chgapters I groaned aloud, but reading on I became more involved in the story. Like someone said in a earlier review-it is quite uncommon. Unpredictable plot twists, few plot holes, classy sex scenes and a belter of a ending. I did notice your strong point is dialogue over description but as this is your first piece, I am sure this will improve.

Hi! you are an amazing and talented writer, and I hope that you will write a lot more fics. U had me glued right on to the end, and I couldn't stop reding. I actually read part of this fic whe was was still on ff.net, and i was really dissapointed when they took all the NC-17 stories off. Even though I got to to the chapter where Stuart and Elijah fell. This story really touched me. Its great, and i will get everyone who likes slash to read it. looking forward to more fics by u!!
~juli~

What an ending! Correction; what a story! Really the characters, some much better than their real life counterparts.
So much emotion in it..

Doth i see a sequel floating in the air? ;) :p

OMG Foraoo person I can't believe you made me read this styff!!!You maDE me cry. please don't threaten me ever again, I'll do anything you want, I swear. Oh dear gofd.

Oh God, how do I review this? Ive been reading this (and re-reading it) for so long that I cant remember when I 1st fell in love with it. It was so tragically written that at times I couldnt stop crying, and there were so many twists in the plot that I felt I would die at many points in the story. The ending was really bittersweet (and I think you intended it that way) and I was heartbroken to discover that this epic story had finally come to an end. I would just like to say that I wish I had half of your talent, you are amazing, I hope that you will continue to write. You've definitely got that spark that intruiges people (me at least) and I hope to see it again sometime.

This review doesnt do justice to your tale at at all, it was beautiful, I'll quit rambling now.
~Savage Rose

I am sorry to be reviewing this so late.
A bittersweet ending, for sure. Such an amazing story. You did an awesome job writing so many different people into it. I loved it.
Very nice chapter.

o.O Ooh.. Wow... Does this mean you may write a sequel one day?
Interesting closure.

Thanks, Foraoo. There was a lot of promise with those first chapters, and I am so glad you stuck with it and didn't quit like a lot of people would have.
I loved all of it.
I can't wait to see what you write next.
^_^
*Hugs*

Wow! at last the great masterpiece is finished! it was an amazing read, a years worth and i was only around for the past 8 months of it! You're writing really has improved over the timespan. i loved the cliff-hanger at the end!