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As The World Falls Down	By : VioletxTwilight Category: Singers/Bands/Musicians > HIM Views: 1491 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. I do not know the members of HIM. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

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Author's notes: Someone said in the review that I sucked as a fanficton writer. Is this true? I was just wondering because they only said that I got some lines from the movie wrong when I meant to do that. I'm making this story mine, so I'm changing lots of things but some are staying. I guess I should have said this first but please if my writing is 'sucky' give some advice to make it better so I can improve. If you say it's sucy then you hurt my feelings and it makes me not want to write anymore…wouldn't it make sense for a review to be what I should have done or what could help?
Ok now that's out of the way…

Jareth: "You know, that last gay joke kind of hurt MY feelings. Not that you'd care or anything…"

Me: "Dude…We all know your gay or at lest bi."

Jareth: " Not true! I'm as straight as an…an…an…"

Me: "A boomerang?"

Jareth: " Yeah! I'm as straight as a Boomer-hey!"

Me:" lol"

'Dritty Deals'

He-was it a he-? Was wearing a black vinyl skin tight body suite. He had no breasts but was curvy like a woman, long and thin yet graceful arms and legs were toned and well shaped. He was lifted two inches off the floor by thick heeled bondage boots that had sliver spiked buckles, lacing up to mid thighs were his well endowed crouch left nothing to the imagination. His hands rested on his round hips and were level with were his zipper was unzipped, leaving pale smooth, creamy chest for the eyes to devour. His long swan like neck was famed by dark brown curls that hung wild and free down his round shoulders. Vi's eyes finally took in his amazingly beautiful and perfect face. Bright-yet pale- green eyes stared at her lined heavily in black kohl, his eyebrow perfectly shaped and arched. Blood red lips smiled a devilish grin, as two sharp fangs gently rested on the full bottom lip, his nose was small but wide and slightly upturned. He was breath taking.
Vi was frozen in place, her heart pounded in her chest. Was this the-
"Ville The Goblin King, at your serves, sweetheart." His voice was rich and deep, sensual and accented. It sent shivers down Vi's spine. Somehow she found her voice,
"W-w-wher-here's Toby?!" Ville raised an eyebrow and stepped closer to the sobbing teenager.
"He's safe, at my castle." Vi looked up and gasped to see that Ville was closer than an inch away.
"I-I want my brother back-please I didn't mean it!"
"What said is said." He tisked, shaking his head." You wished your brat of a brother away and now he's gone. Your parents will forget him, when you leave this room all the toys will be gone, it will be like it was before. Well, you'll still have your stepmother but she's a bit old to be a goblin." He chuckled.
"Bu-but he must be so scarred!" tears of regret ran free down Vi's face. Ville's curl smile softened, he was a sucker for a crying lady.
"There there, dear. I'll make a deal with you." Vi's sobs softened as well, she rubbed her eyes.
"Wha-what kind of deal?"
"The kind where you get something," His smiled turned back into a evil grin as he stepped forward, bring his hips against hers and leading down so his lips hovered just above hers.
"And I get something." Vi gulped, feeling her knees go weak at the feeling of his hot breath on her face, making her lips tingle.
"Ok." She whispered closing her eyes waiting for his lips to close that gap, hoping they were as sift and sweet as they looked. The kiss never came and when she opened her eyes…she wasn't in her home anymore.

Before her was miles of dead sand, Ville carefully turned her to face the other way. First she saw two moons hanging in the sky, one was pink and the other had a green tint. The sun was red and not much lager than the moons. Stars were easy to make out in the purple goop of the sky. Below it was the Labyrinth…It went on as far as her eyes could see, near what she guessed was the middle sat a castle and city so large she could see them clearly from such a far distance.
"You want me to solve that?" Vi's voice was a squeak. Ville laughed,
"No! what gave you that idea!? You just have to get to the center, to my castle. That is where you will find your brother." Vi turned to him,
"Is that all?" He smiled,
"No, you only have 24 hours to solve it, be at my castle and in my bed," He smirked than added, "Naked." Vi gagged.
"Your joking!" He grabbed her by the head and pressed his lips to hers roughly, forcing his wet tongue passed her closed lips, kissing her long and deep. Finally he let go and she stumbled a little panting.
"Do you think I'm joking now?" He sneered now grabbing her hand and bringing it to his semi-hard cock, Vi gasped feeling everything though the hot thin vinyl. She pulled away quickly looking disgusted. Vi looked back at him,
"What if I lose?"
"Than I keep your brother….and you."
"What!? Why?" Vi demanded her eyes widened. Ville laughed again, it made her even more unsettled.
"I'm a pervert and your very beautiful sweetheart, do I need more of a reason?" She shook her head slowly, fighting back more tears.
"Fine." Her voice broke a little, Ville rolled his eyes.
"You already agreed darling, there's no turning back anyway. Remember, 24 hours." Than he was gone.

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