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Strange Domicile	By : Tana Category: Singers/Bands/Musicians > Savage Garden Views: 1028 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. I do not know the members of Savage Garden. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

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I hope you all are liking this story so far. Please send me feed back telling me what you think, please. This chapter gets a lot darker then the ones before it. Violence comes into play. Oh and the pancake thing which you will find in this chapter. I told someone i ate a pancake the other day and they did not know what it was. So you have a few ways of saying it now. You will find out lol. Ok enough with my rambling go red the fic. En
The next morning Dan awoke around eight AM. He went down stairs to make breakfast. He hoped Darren would be in a better mood today. He would cook Darren his favorite breakfast, to try and make him feel happier. Dan took out the pancake/flap jack/ hot cake mix, and began to mix it with water. He looked for chocolate chips but could not find any. He was about to just leave them plain when he saw a Hershey bar lying on the kitchen table. He broke it in little peaces and mixed it with the batter. Then began to cook the pancakes. After cooking seven of them he placed them on a heated plate in the middle of the table. Then went up stairs to get Darren and Jill. As he walked in their bedroom he saw Jill drawling a picture, and Darren still sleeping on next to her. He drew nearer, and saw the notebook she was drawling in. "Hi daddy" she said as she saw Dan. "Hi sweetie, I don't think you should draw in that book" "How come?" she asked seeming confused. "Well because that's Daz's book for work. He might get mad if he sees you drawling in it." Dan stated calmly. He realized that it was a mistake. "Ohhh im sorry Daddy, I was drawling the picture for him" she said holding up the picture of a sun. It had a smiley face drawn on it, and had butter flies and rainbows around it. At the bottom it read I love you. "Dan felt bad for bursting her bubble, but didn't want her to get in trouble again. "Very prettyst rst rip it out and he'll never know ok." "OK" She ripped the picture out very carefully, and put the book back where she had found it. As she was doing this Dan had gone to wake Darren. "Hey baby wake up" he whispered softly into Darren's ear. "Hmmm" was his reply. "Come on babe wake up." "Whatyawant?" he said still half asleep. "Come on I have breakfast for you." "Umm ok I'll be up soon" "nope you're getting up now" Dan said as he grabbed a hold of Darren. With much effort he picked him up. "Hey whateryoudoin?" "Well im taking you downstairs" "why it's early?" "Because I have breakfast waiting for you." As soon as Darren heard that he was awake. "Ok take me to it" he said as he wrapped his arms around Dan's neck and kissed him gently. "I should make breakfast for you everyday," Dan said as he carried Darren down stairs, Jill fallowing behind. As they entered the kitchen Dan took Darren to one of the kitchen chairs and placed him gently on it. He put three of the pan cakes/hot cakes/flap jacks on Darren's plate, two on his own and one on Jill's. She never ate more then one anyway. He then went over to the counter to fetch the syrup. As he walked to the counter He saw that the left over batter had spilled all over the counter. He didn't remember spilling it. He just cleaned it up before Darren saw it and started bitching. "Daniel hurry up with it I'm hungry." Darren moaned from where he was seated. "Ok, baby hold on a sec" He said as he grabbed the blueberry toping. He handed it to Darren and sat down across from him. Darren put a generous amount on his pan cakes/flap jacks/hot cakes, and handed the container to Daniel. Dan absolutely drowned his, and handed the container to Jill. She put a little bit on, and set the container in the middle of the table. They ate in silence, neither knowing just what to say. After breakfast Dan cleared the dishes. Darren sat sleepily in the chair watching him. As Darren was about to get up, Jill crawled up on his lap. "Um Daz" she said timidly. "Yes Jill" he responded passively, not looking at her. "I made you a picture," she said handing him the picture she had drawn. He smiled slightly and looked at it. As he did so the smile faded from his full lips. There it was a large red X drawn over the smiling sun. The butterflies were bats. And where she had written I love you at the bottom, it read I hate you in large red letters. Before Jill knew it Darren had slapped her across the face, and she was sitting on the floor. Daniel had herd the loud slap and turned around. He went to Jill as quickly as he could, and picked her up. 'Darren what the hell did you hit her for?" he said an irate quality taking over his calm voice. "Look at what she fuckin drew me," he shrieked, shoving the picture at Dan. Dan looked at the picture once more. "I see sunshine, butterflies, and rainbows. At the bottom it says I love you, tell me what is so wrong with that?" "That is NOT what is on that picture." Darren stated firmly. Dan shoved the picture back at Darren, who took another look at it. There it was a sun, butterflies, and rainbows. At the bottom it said in pink marker, I love you. "That's that's not wha-" "Darren dry up, I think you need to apologize." Immediately Darren began to cry. "I'm so sorry I don't know what came over me," he said picking Jill up from her spot on the floor. She didn't say a word, nothing could be said. She almost seemed frightened of Darren. "Well I have to get ready for work." Daniel stated sharply. "Can I leave the kids here with you Daren or will I have to take them with me?" The question was asked with a sarcasm Daniel rarely used. "I'll be fine" Darren said very quietly, looking at the floor. About an hour later Dan had left for work. Jill sat in the large living room seated on her black and red spotted beanbag, watching Blues Clues. Baby Blake had woken up about twenty minutes ago, and Darren sat on the sofa feeding him. Things were very quiet that morning. Jill didn't want to do or say anything; for fear that she would anger Darren. Darren felt extreme guilt for his actions, and did not know how to make up for them. As they sat in the living room, Darren began to feel strangely. He felt like another presence was in the room. He tried to ignore it, and pay attention to his children. He called Jill over to the sofa to sit with him. He put his left arm around her, and held Blake with the other arm. As the afternoon continued to wear on some strange things started to happen. From the living room they heard a glass brake in the kitchen. Darren walked in to find the glass vase that sat in the middle of the table shattered on the kitchen floor. He grumbled to himself and scoped up the vase. As he did so he cut his finger on a shard of the glass. This put him in a foul mood, and he stomped back into the living room. Blake had fallen asleep in the play pin, and Jill had fallen asleep on the maroon love seat. As Darren sat brooding he saw an ominous shadow pass across the living room. It looked as if it was in human form. This scared Darren out of his wits. He sat petrified for a bit. He thought he was seeing things. He was not sure what to do with himself, so he went to the refrigerator to get a drink. As he was reaching for the Dr Pepper, he saw a bottle of wine in the back of the fridge. He thought maybe having a glass or two would calm his nerves. He brought the bottle into the living room and sat down on the sofa. By mid afternoon a third of it was gone. He continued to see the shadow, so he kept drinking. He dragged the play pin nearer to the sofa, and brought Jill to lie on the sofa as he sat next to her. Another glass was herd in the kitchen. By four thirty two thirds of the bottle was gone. Around five the picture of Darren and Dan's wedding day fell from it's place on the TV, and shattered into a million peaces. With that Darren took the last drink of the whine, tossing the empty bottle to the floor. A few seconds later the front door was opened. Darren ran for the door almost falling twice. He met Dan in the middle of the foyer, and wrapped his arms around him. "Daniel-Daniel I was so scared today, All this stuff ha--happened and-" Daniel immediately smelled the alcohol on his husband, and pushed him away. "Darren what the hell is wrong with you, any idiot knows you don't get drunk with a baby, and a six year old in the house." he said weekly. "I didn't mean it Dany, I saw this thing, it scared me, I had some whine cuz I thought I was seeing things, then I saw it some more and I just drank more." he explained franticly. Dan grabbed his hand and pulled him into the kitchen. There were glasses and dishes broken all over the place. "What the hell did you do?" Dan said getting angry. "I didn't baby, this shit kept braking an-" Daniel then dragged Darren into the living room. The bottle lay on the floor. Jill lay on her spot on the couch. The baby lay at the opposite end of the couch. He had no shirt on, and no blanket. "Darren the baby could have fallen of the couch, why isn't he in the play pin, and why does he not have on a shirt or blanket?" He was in the playpen, I had a shirt on him, when I left the living room." "The fuck you did, your not even fit to take care of these kids anymore" Dan sneered. Anger flashed in Darren's eyes. He wouldn't take any of this from Daniel. "SHUT UP DANIEL" he screamed. He then grabbed hold of Dan and threw him to the floor. "Darren stop it write now." "Don't you tell me what to do Daniel!" He said as he kicked Dan in the side.
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