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Reviews for As I lay dying

By : Semichan
  • From dirusninjou on June 24, 2008
    O.O;; it just stops.... where's the ending? you could make Kyo find Toshiya's body in the bedroom be the ending.... like Kyo went to check on Toshiya and heard no answer when he knocked, so he gets the hide-a-key and opens the door to find the bassist near death... kyo goes over and cradles him as his last breath leaves his body.
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  • From Arsinen on April 24, 2008
    You are very cruel. I love it and hate it at the same time. It was written well not many mistakes. I almost cried it was very powerful. Hope to see more work from you. Ja!
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  • From KrystalChronicals on April 23, 2008
    Good story
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