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Reviews for Unexpected

By : Line
  • From ANON - benzoyl on September 27, 2004
    Oh new fic! Carter? hmmmm... I think I can live with that. Why isn't anyone writing more Em/Proof?! *cries*

    Anyways, Carter. Pretty, blond AND conniving! Woohoo!!! He's in Detroit. Why? Marshall would be like, 'What are you doing here Carter?' and he'd be like, 'Oh I was in the neighborhood'. Goddamn right, he is. I wanm tom to top Em, teach him about the birds and the bees. hee!

    Please. Do continue. :)
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  • From ANON - Aissa on September 26, 2004
    Damn, you write fast! I was in stitches reading this chappie. Marsh is so cute being so confused like that. I can imagine his confused, fidgeting, pretty ass like that (you seen the nudie pics? damn *g*). Deshaun is so cute, too. He knows his bestfriend too well. They're an old couple. Your characterization of them is so real and multidimensional. I love it. And Nick in Detroit? Scheming bitch! Go Nick! lol! I hope we get to the pink and sexy parts soon. ;)

    Ok, I believe you. This is your first fic. I still say you write like a pro. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Aissa on September 26, 2004
    Oh god, I dunno if this has something to do with Encore coming but wow! We're getting new fics people! I get so excited to see a new story added to this list.

    this is so good. I love the fact that it starts on the other person's POV. I love it when Marshall's being seen in another's eyes. I have this thing with Em being described, I can never get enough how beautiful he is and I love reading it on fics. Not so much of a boyband fan but Nick Carter? Yeah, can definitely live with that. That boy is hot! And he's tall, he can carry Marshall around and protect his honor. lol!

    Anywayz, I hope you update soon because this is really good and I want to see some S-E-X. *g*

    The last sentences killed me:

    "I've had a taste of the drug and now I want more. So much more."

    Woohoo! Go Nick! Great job, Line. This is your first slash fic? liar! you write like a pro. ;) more, more, more!!!
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