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Reviews for On fire

By : Kat1975
  • From TempestRuby on November 30, 2011
    Please go back to writing this story. It's amazing.
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  • From ANON - Gina on December 16, 2007
    Sorry...I just realized my last review was rather rude. I love the story but the music geek in me came out for a moment. I haven't even finished it and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Gina on December 16, 2007
    Uh...the lyrics are by the Foo Fighters.
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  • From ANON - sabine on September 24, 2007
    I just discovered this story this week-end, please go on with it, it's adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    but i still wonder that there are people out there who would really not recognize this gorgious scott...especially since 300 ;-)
    sabine
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  • From ANON - trillian on August 13, 2007
    Hey, I love your story n your style, so plz dont stop writin ;) would be great to read more chapters!! Take care xx
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  • From ANON - bakermama on August 11, 2007
    I hope I'm not the only one that is still reading this excellent piece.As promised , I'm posting again.I haven't gone back to re-read the chapters. Has anything changed? I like them as they were. As I noted before, you are a gifted writer. In the latest chapter you wrote alot without being too obvious. This gives the reader the power to use their own mind to feel out the characters. It is a much more affective way of writing, I really disike too much unnecessary fluff.IMHO.Keep it up, even if I'm the only one reading, you have my undivided attention.
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  • From ANON - bakermama on August 07, 2007
    Beautiful! Read this when it was first posted, have been lurking ever since.Very happy to see that you decided to continue writing, hope you will finish. Though you have a real knack for hot and steamy sex, the characters and their relationship are developing with the same fervor.Keep up the excellent writing, I will keep posting.
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  • From ANON - layla on January 12, 2007
    perfection!
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  • From ANON - aurora on October 24, 2006
    i just stumbled upon your story about a long-time crush of mine - GB - and all I can say is WOW! YOur story is HOT HOT HOT HOT! But what makes it really stand out is how different it is. I love that it's set in England (not many are, or they aren't written by someone who seems to have first-hand knowledge of living there), that was hot sex at the beginning, but then she backs off and really makes him wait, and finally it sounds real without being gross. So many stories are living entirely in their own fantasies, no reality (*grin*, a certain amount of fantasy is essential of course) - but for example as he is about to sink into her (in the first chapter) he has to find her opening. I love your story and I will be checking back to get the rest. Keep it up and keep it hot! (as if you've had any problem in that area)
    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - challen on July 20, 2006
    Come on, pleeeease (that's whining)!
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  • From ANON - black winged angel on February 14, 2006
    Just to let you know, chapter 19 is finished & the following one in the making. The bad news is that there is still no way to update or edit the story because of the technical problems of aff.net
    As soon as I am able to upload, I will do so.

    That leaves me with the most important reason for posting:

    Thank you all for your lovely reviews...they are so important to me for many reasons.

    Every single review makes me aware of things, gives me ideas, makes me smile or reconsider, but mostly every single review motivates me to keep writing...

    THANK YOU!!
    ...and please continue to review. Like I said it means a lot to me...no matter what you have to say.
    Admittedly I enjoy the detailed reviews especially, because they are my only chance to know what you really think, what is well received and what not!

    The more detailed a review is, the more is its potential to influence me and by that gives me a chance to make the story better!

    Another thing: only now I have started to write myself I have realised just how much work it is to write a story and how much heartblood you have to pour into it. That makes it all the more important to have you write a few words in return...

    So thank you all & thanks for sticking around to read my little story :)

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  • From ANON - Gaps of Misery on February 08, 2006
    Thanks for the medal! And of course for Gerry, too. I will keep him until Saturday, then I'll return him to you just so you know I'm truly a lovely reviewer!!! :P As for the last chapter: WOW, WOW, WOW!! Very hot! But you did a terrible cliffhanger, so I'm pissed. *lol* I think I'll need at least two more Gerries and four more medals to make it alright again... ;)
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  • From ANON - anon on February 05, 2006
    OK, hope you are having a good time! Everybody has to live a little! When you do update, you better not have her be mad at him or they better have great make up sex!
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  • From ANON - black winged angel on January 30, 2006
    I have neither forgotten you all nor my story...it's just that my life is so busy right now.

    I have been away for a few days and there was much partying, lying on the beach, going to concerts and going out to be done :D ...scusi.

    But I am all keen to write the next chapter and put it online asap...there are at least another 6-10 chapters to come.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 25, 2006
    ch 18: great! where is theupdate? don't make her be mad at him!
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