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Reviews for Come Turning of the Tide

By : TaimaMarie
  • From oliversangel on December 10, 2008
    If you had enough ketchup you could make tomato soup.....er...or not. LOL. Poor Lily-Rose. It's so hard on little children when they don't understand why their parents can't be together anymore. Oooooh, there are already starting to be little sparks flying. *squee* LOL.

    That women treated you horribly. She had no sense in her head, and telling her friends to just drop off their kids. bullshit. My aunt was just telling me one of her sons friends stayed a whole weekend at her house. Came home from school with him, and didn't leave sometime on sunday. She's never met this woman, never even talked to her on the phone, or anything. I can't imagine letting my child stay with a family I never even met, or never even ask if it's ok for my kid to stay the whole weekend. Some people have no brains at all, I'm telling you.

    Well, it was a good chapter luv, as always, can't wait to read more. ^.^ *backs away slowly and slinks off to work on update, and stop procrastinating* LOL. XXOO

    Oh, and I', glad you're almost done with exams. good luck with the rest of them, and hurray for a month without school!!! ^.^
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  • From oliversangel on December 09, 2008
    I am highly offended, thank you very much. Stay at home moms are not creepy or crazy or weird. ^.^ I'm kidding, I'm not offended, but you have to understand where we are coming from, shut up in a house all day, with only a child(ren) for company....we become starved for real adult interaction. But....Charity was right not to trust the woman, she probably *would* have dropped the kids off and headed for Vegas, laughing maniacally all the way, screaming, "I'm free, I'm free, I'm free!!" LOL. Oooh, Oooh Oooh, that little girl sure is testing the waters. She is certainly a handful. The part where Johnny was hiding behind the tree was adorable, and his line about having to be dramatic was funny. Well, I am glad your exams are going well so far. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From JDHollywood on December 09, 2008
    not a bad start, i like it
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  • From oliversangel on December 08, 2008
    Awww, poor buddy, he burnt the grilled cheese. Charity is a clever girl, pulling the tooth fairy trick like that. I see we have similiar ideas on how a little girl would react to another woman in their daddy's life, no matter how innocent the interaction.....you'll see what I mean. Poor darling. Who could blame her though. Jack is beyond adorable....loved the missing two front teeth. Again you put me to shame with your updating frequency. LOL. How did your exams go? Good I hope. ^.^ As always, I look forward to more. And you can thank yourself for me starting the next chapter tomorrow or tonight....you give me an encouraging kick in the trousers. LOL. But I'm sure you will have chapter five up before chapter 12. ^.^ Oh and in reguards to something you suggested in your review....you really are a mind reader, you know that? ^.^ XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on December 07, 2008
    I've got pain pills, so everything is copacetic. (sp) LOL. I would love some of your chicken noodle soup. ^.^

    Poor Johnny. My heart was breaking for him, and for his children. And I could totally see Lily-Rose rolling her eyes when she said her line about Johnny playing pretend all day. LOL. That was adorable. You put me to shame with the frequency of your updates. LOL. As always, can't wait for the next chapter. Mine should be up in the next couple of days, I'll email you. And as a warning, there will be some sadness in the next chapter. ^.^ Maybe we can even the tearful score a bit.....LOL. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on December 06, 2008
    *giggles* I loved his, "Considering that Johnny FREAKING Depp is sitting here, than yes." line. Brilliant. LOL. Loved the new chapter, I was pleased as punch to see it. I was planning on finishing my next update today, but I ended up in the stupid hospital. Everything is fine now, but dammit, sometimes being a girl sucks. LOL. Anywho, love the story so far, good luck with the exams, and your Christmas break is coming up, YAY!!! XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on December 05, 2008
    *SQUEE* I was just thinking the other day, it would be nice to read another Johnny story, instead of writing one, and lookee here....LOL. And from one of my favorite writers no less!! Hurray!! Great start. You have a talent for breaking my heart. LOL. I felt so bad for Johnny. And I can totally see him really calling the girl, and complaining about the other nannies being weird. ^.^ Well, I wonder what Miss. Charity will do when she discovers who she is really going to be working for. Is there a nosebleed in her future? LOL. Love it darling!! Hope all is well with you!! XXOO
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