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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From ctallent on June 03, 2009
    lol, elle is the best.... very sweet update...
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  • From Violence on June 02, 2009
    Yeah, so my reviews've been coming in sparadic movements lately because finals are kicking my ass. Carrie's such a gentleman in this story! How many people are completely willing to lure their girlfriend's husband into their room just to get the shit beaten out of them so they can send his ass to jail for sure? Whew. That's love right there. Beautiful and oddly sweet. And she even egged him on. That takes balls. I agree with Kelly, never let that crazy girl outta your sight again.
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  • From ctallent on June 02, 2009
    hopefully this is the end of paul and the girls can go on and be in love now and raise their kids.... glad to see kelly is loving carrie more now....
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  • From Violence on May 28, 2009
    You have no idea how happy it made me to see the title used in the fic. Straight up squeed. Even given the circumstances. I felt bad for Elle being shunned but it's for the best not to see Carrie looking like she got the shit beat outta her. Oh hell naw. No one gets to attempt rape on Carrie unless it involves Kelly and a safe word but then again you can't rape the willing can you? I hate that Carrie's the one beaten this time but then again, role reversal is nice.
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  • From ctallent on May 27, 2009
    poor carrie, hope she wasnt raped. also hope this makes there relationship stronger and not worse....kudos to kelly
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  • From Violence on May 26, 2009
    No. No. No. No. Noooooo. Not Carrie! If that was Paul someone had better damn well be whippin out a switchblade and gettin ready to rumble in the next chapter. If it was some whiney homophobic bitch than a bus going at least 70 mph should be involved. I've grown a strange attachment to Carrie over the course of time and when they damage the goods I always want someone's ass kicked. Oops. Either way it blows that Carrie's taking the heat and I'm really pleased that Kelly never actually listened to her and just kept on pushing until she found out what was wrong. Nice stuff.
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  • From ctallent on May 24, 2009
    oh my gosh, i knew it....it was paul wasnt it... hopefully he gets hit by a truck....lol great update.
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  • From Violence on May 22, 2009
    That was cute how Carrie did as Elle requested. That interviewer was a complete asshole. I hope he gets trampled over... by cows. "as she reahced for the door handle"!? What is that? That makes it sound like someone's waiting behind it to maime her.
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  • From ctallent on May 21, 2009
    poor carrie, i pray that is not paul at that door.. and that he doesnt find kelly before carrie gets home... sweet how carrie patted her stomach for elle...

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  • From Violence on May 19, 2009
    They're so cute! Taking care of and looking after each other. And that's really all I can say.
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  • From Violence on May 18, 2009
    'Fine..i ate the chalk.' I could not stop laughing during the whole chalk part. It was so freaking cute too. And I loved that both of them were all ready to spoil the hell outta Elle before Carrie figured out she had pulled one over on them. Such a smart kid. Laughed even harder when Carrie decided to take her back to school. Good parental moment.
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  • From Violence on May 17, 2009
    Ugh. what a whiny bitch. So your daughter's happy, gay, and has a girlfriend, daughter, and son who love her no matter what. Wow, that must be a real tragedy for Carole to endure. But she almost redeemed herself at the end for acknowledging it, I give her credit for that.
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  • From greens28 on May 16, 2009
    WOW Very intense w/ the social worker. Little Elle is a delight..I love how U write her-so sweet & innoncent & very funny. I loved how Kelly & Carrie's mom's bonded-they all hate Jason's new girlfriend-very funny.
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  • From sugar on May 13, 2009
    aww that was really sweet :')
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  • From Violence on May 11, 2009
    YES. Thank you Ashley for realizing the stupidity and getting Carrie to fix it. And thank you Carrie for explaining. Carrie needs to confront her mom about putting all these crazy ideas in Kelly's head about her not being faithful/loyal. The woman really must not know her daughter too well if she never even had an inkling on an idea that it's been Kelly the whole time. The whole update was beautiful really.
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