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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From Violence on April 23, 2009
    ROFL. Elle named the dog... Little Miss Fluffy Bear, hahahaha. xD Carrie's being tortured with that name. I loved it when Ashley got mad that she got out witted by Elle. Cute.
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  • From ctallent on April 22, 2009
    awww very sweet update... thanks
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  • From greens28 on April 22, 2009
    Too dang cute for words...I love how smart Elle is-all her scences rae just so funny & cute. Carrie getting her a puppy was a brilliant idea. Awesome job.
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  • From Violence on April 20, 2009
    That was beautiful. Can't really think of any other word to describe it other than that. Love that Carrie did that, makes me go aww. Had to chuckle at the part where Elle says 'course she is. she looks like me.'
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  • From ctallent on April 19, 2009
    very sweet chapter, elle is so cute.... thanks for updating these
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  • From Violence on April 18, 2009
    Elle is a fucking genius. So cute how she knew Carrie would eventually cave and how she didn't want Carrie to leave. Heart warming. damn, almost forgot that Kelly was still stuck in 02/03. Lmaoed at the last two lines.
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  • From ctallent on April 17, 2009
    awww sweet update, thanks.... it is going great
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  • From Violence on April 15, 2009
    whew. I actually thought some hardcore shit was gonna go down for a minute there. I'm glad they acknowledged their stupidity, lol. The ending was the heart stealer though. I love that Carrie wants to someday marry Kelly and make a family with Elle as hers. Adorable.
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  • From ctallent on April 14, 2009
    oh thank god carrie found her time... great update, cant wait to see where this goes...
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  • From Violence on April 12, 2009
    Damn, mate. Feeling in an angsty writing mood lately? lol. Again the moronic Carrie strikes again. Someone should purchase her a muzzle or an electric shock collar that goes off whenever she goes near alcohol. I also did one of the loudest, hardest facepalms ever. What. the. fuck? The first reason being that I wanna throttle Carrie for getting so out of control. Second to Kelly for not saying anything. And the third goes to Paul because I don't know his intentions. I've got this sense of severe dread running through me. Odd. This chapter left me with my jaw dropped in disbelief.
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  • From Violence on April 10, 2009
    My thoughts: oh. fuck. I was all happy about them getting away by themselves and then the ice breaker came. Now would be a great time for Kelly to have a flashback and sucker punch him. I knew he'd be back eventually but not while she's still memory challenged. Can only imagine Carrie's reaction if she ever sees him.
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  • From ctallent on April 09, 2009
    oh no no paul, hope carrie gets there in time. please dont let them get hurt......no no no
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  • From greens28 on April 08, 2009
    Just read last 2 updates & they wee both Awesome. Kelly's little girl is just to cute...Ainte carrie 7 Momma kiss now..taht was a great line & the one about her telling the Postman that they kiss now also..Too funny. Great stuff. Keep it coming.
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  • From Violence on April 07, 2009
    Carrie's parents must be insane if they think that Kelly's actually gonna go running back to her husband after she remembers. I love that Carrie defended her intentions. Oh yea, rofl at the end of the last chapter where Elle bluntly came out and said that Kelly and Carrie kiss as well as when she told the postman. Cute, hilarious, and embarrassing. The perfect child. Thank you Kelly for reassuring Carrie. She needed it.
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  • From Violence on April 04, 2009
    I have once again managed to laugh my way through a chapter. Hahahah, Elle's such a smartass. Love that Carrie's gonna make the would be garden into a play area. I can see Carrie's regreting inviting Kelly's family over now, lol. Listening to your relatives have sex in your house has gotta be just a tad bit disturbing. Lmao, I love how as soon as they mention hotel Ashley and Jason come a running.
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