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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From ctallent on April 02, 2009
    oh man great chapter....please please update these stories.....
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  • From Violence on March 22, 2009
    That was cute how Kelly and Jeanne were bitching/fighting while Carrie just sat helpless under the covers. Family reunion!? Oh, those are never good. When Kelly's family gets there I am so expecting a huge amount of humor to arise from it. I like that Jeanne's totally cool with Kelly and Carrie dating. Then again it's not like it could get much worse after Paul. Speaking of which KC needs a divorce, lol. 'Elle told me.....Mommy and Auntie Carrie kiss.' So cute! The ending was even better with Carrie and Elle in the bed together.
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  • From greens28 on March 21, 2009
    That was one of my fav updates from this story. It was so funny & touching. I love the banter between Kelly and her mom & Carrie giving the little wave from under the covers-so cute. Elle is just a handful...but so cute and smart. Love it.
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  • From Violence on March 21, 2009
    I don't think I can really comment on much without being too repetitive but holy damn was that insanely cute. From the date to Kelly being nervous to the tree. There was nothing I could possibly not like about this chapter.
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  • From greens28 on March 20, 2009
    Carrie is doing everything right here.. What no Drama in the latest update? Or will that be when they go on their date? I am sure you got something sneaky that will leave us wanting more in the next update. I did love this one also-it was fun & they are so cute toghter. Awesome job!!!

    P.s. Wasn't Carrie awesome on AI??? Can't wait to see her win her first ACM EOTY award!!!!
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  • From Violence on March 19, 2009
    Woohoo! Date night. Can't wait to see what Carrie's got up her sleeve.
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  • From Violence on March 18, 2009
    'It's not funny....Grandma killed Bambi.' Oh my god, you have no idea just how hard i laughed at that. Hahah, loved how Jason saluted Jeanne the drill sergeant. The last couple of lines about Ashley and winking and happiness were awesome.
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  • From greens28 on March 18, 2009
    Nice update.. I am glad that Carrie is standing by Kelly. It is good to see them really opening up & being honest with each other. Keep going-good job!!
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  • From Violence on March 17, 2009
    I can't believe Kelly stayed either. 'Grandma Uncle Jason and Auntie Ashley are here......and they have lots of bags.' That combination while in the middle of nowhere just makes me scared.
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  • From greens28 on March 17, 2009
    That was so sweet. i'm so glad theat Ellie told Kelly the truth..maybe her real memories will start to come back. Great job.
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  • From Violence on March 17, 2009
    Thank you, thank you, thank you. So damn relieved Kelly didn't just bolt and instead questioned Elle about it. That little girl is totally heaven sent now. That's what's so wonderful about innocence. And the truth is out. Yay! It would have sucked if you had dragged that out for a couple chapters, lol. The next morning's still gonna be pretty interesting.
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  • From Violence on March 12, 2009
    Carrie! What the hell are you doing girl!? Tell her the truth before she escapes out your window, steals the car, and has to learn about her past from Ashley. Oh I can tell this isn't gonna go over well, not at all. Poor Elle, she's being tugged in two different directions. I'm frustratd with Kelly i mean the way she came to the conclusion that it was Carrie abusing her makes no sense. At all. The morning after should be a fun one.
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  • From greens28 on March 05, 2009
    Nice job.this fic is coming along nicely. I love how Kelly is starting to bond with her daughter...& the jerk is out of the picture. I like that Kelly sees the 3 of them a alittle family. Very sweet. Carrie has been very patient with her & wonderful to the little girl. Look forward to reading more.
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  • From Violence on March 04, 2009
    Good god. Why the hell do they have to be so damn adorable? Completely happy that Elle doesn't miss Paul at all. On the last chapter I'm dying to know why Kelly got such a strong feeling of horrible? Odd that she'd have that feeling once her and Carrie started getting more into it. Curious.
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  • From Violence on February 26, 2009
    Aw, man that's unbelievably cute that Kelly and Elle were watching Carrie's run on idol. LoL, Kelly is all over Carrie. If only I were crude enough to say Kelly's just about ready to tap that. Curious as to what gonna happen next.
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