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By : writer101
  • From greens28 on February 22, 2009
    Ellie is so cute...I can her kissing. The 3 of them interact so well together, even with Kelly not remembering thigs. U are doing a great job. I love it.
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  • From Violence on February 22, 2009
    Lol, "I can hear kisses." Too cute. Damn, unrepressed Kelly is bold. I like. Yay, I'm glad to have gotten a half explaination why Kelly would even go for an ass like Paul. And the whole thing of Carrie being jealous was adorable. Not to mention when Elle walked in on them because she could 'hear kisses.'
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  • From Violence on February 21, 2009
    "it looked comfy in Carrie's arms so the little girl rested her head and closed her eyes." That line was brilliant. It's not like Elle isn't already the most adorable kid ever but that just made her so much more. Poor Kelly, she's putting her foot in her mouth and she doesn't even know it. And Carrie's all paranoid for some reason. Interesting.
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  • From Violence on February 19, 2009
    Oh hot damn. KC really is gay. Awesome. It was painstakingly sweet when Kelly thought Elle was both hers and Carrie's. I LOVED that Kelly made the first move and they finally got their first kiss. Lovely.
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  • From Violence on February 18, 2009
    Oh no. Ex's are never a good thing. Elle is so damn cute and innocent yet kinda knowing when it comes to Carrie being with Kelly. Yeah, you know she completely remembered that dream. Probably about one of Paul's beatings. Again, wow with the bombshell and a cliffie. It was a little bit funny though that Kelly thinks she came out. Carrie's gonna have fun with that explaination, lol.
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  • From Violence on February 16, 2009
    Wow. Don't have much else to say except that was incredibly sweet and adorable... and almost sad when Elle asked why Kelly was so far away. That last line completely signified how the three of them were meant to be a family. ...wonder how Paul's doing... kidding.
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  • From Violence on February 14, 2009
    Oh man. This is hilarious. I was completely like what the fuck when Kelly said her and Ashley were a couple. Carrie's was all cute being jealous. Love Ashley's reaction to the idea of her and Kelly being together. It'll be good for Elle to finally see her mom after like two weeks but I don't know how she or Kelly will take it. Can't wait to find out. It keeps getting better and funnier.
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  • From Mo56 on February 14, 2009
    ah i totally called that! lol nice
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  • From Violence on February 14, 2009
    Damn. You really know how to drop a bombshell. Why the fuck would she be with Paul then if she was gay all along? Last ditch attempt at the hetero life? This just got so much more intense. I feel bad for Kelly though. She's all confused and frustrated. Really wanna know how '02 Kelly's so open and why she would keep it a secret. Or maybe she was just humoring Carrie. Or maybe her label made her hide it.
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  • From Mo56 on February 13, 2009
    WTF?!
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  • From Mo56 on February 11, 2009
    this is heart breaking. but paul is gone now. so thats good
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  • From Violence on February 10, 2009
    Lol at Paul giving up so easily. I like that though. Hope he gets arrested and given the death sentence. It was cute that Jason told Elle Kelly's brain fell out. Completely funny. It would really suck if Kelly never remembered but then again it'd be like a fresh start because all the pain Paul caused would be gone and she's all Carrie's, no guilt. woohoo! Can't wait to see how Kelly reacts to Carrie, I'm so anxious. Just curious though, what year are we actually in?
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  • From Violence on February 09, 2009
    Oh wow. THAT was unexpected. Kelly with memory loss, damn. I feel that Ashley deserves a smack on the back of the head for not telling or at least hinting to someone sooner. Jason should definitely get the chance to sucker punch Paul a couple times, at the least. I think the doctor's a complete moron but if it keeps Paul away from Kelly I'm game. Kinda sad that she doesn't remember Carrie but her brain probably just reverted to her happiest time before her living nightmare as Paul's wife began. Mental block and all that. What about Elle? There's no way Carrie'll let her go with him. Carrie should totally screw what the doctor said and reintroduce herself into Kelly's life.
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  • From Mo56 on February 09, 2009
    i dont even know what to say...
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  • From Violence on February 08, 2009
    I got a little too excited reading this chapter so I had to read it five times before I could fully process it. So yeah, I face palmed at the part where Paul came home. Totally knew that was gonna happen. "Hitting her first on the face, she tasted blood." I literally yelled fuck when I saw that. goddamn you Paul. And then that sweet little moment between Carrie and Elle. Complete heart melter. Paul's attitude and crying is confusing the hell outta me. The man has issues. Sweet jesus, I think I teared up a little. Carrie should kick his ass. Right there, in the waiting room.
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