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Reviews for Baby Can I Hold You

By : writer101
  • From marbleandtoast on August 20, 2010
    I love this story. It is interesting to read and definitely different from the others. I hope that you finish this story in the future. Please. Love this couple pairing.
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  • From marbleandtoast on August 05, 2010
    Great story. I hope that you will continue. I want the happy ending. :)
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  • From Violence on July 24, 2009
    Elle is adorable. And to think I almost forgot Kelly lost her memory. Loved that bit with Reba insight at the end.
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  • From Violence on July 19, 2009
    Holy shit. That's wicked. She wasn't even legally married to the bastard and he still felt like he owned her. Proved innocent? As if they didn't take pictures of the aftermath. Holler for happy family time. One thing I would like to see is Paul sent to jail and made into some big, burly dudes bitch, lol. The ultimate karmic payback.
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  • From ctallent on July 14, 2009
    great update... good that paul and kelly were never married...now maybe the girls can get hitched....
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  • From Violence on July 03, 2009
    Busted a motherfuckin gut at the kissing part. There're no words to describe insanity/hilarity of your fics. That part also built on the Carrie's the dude in the relationship factor even more. Lol, that cab driver attitude never gets old. I totally imagined him as a miserable indian guy with a hardcore motherland broken english accent. Add in a drunk Kelly and it's all sorts of funny. Poor Carrie having to fight off horny drunk Kelly, her falling asleep just made it better.
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  • From ctallent on June 29, 2009
    great update... carrie how can you turn her down.... elle is freaking hilarious.
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  • From greens28 on June 27, 2009
    Elle is to cute-I love her character. They make such a great family. Loved it.
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  • From Violence on June 26, 2009
    "seems everyone saw her as the man in their relationship." Rofl, too accurate. Carrie's totally the dude. Typical of Jeanne and Ashley to be attempting to plan the wedding without even consulting the half of the two people actually getting married. The ending was fucking adorable on Elle's part. Makes me wish all kids were like that.
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  • From Violence on June 21, 2009
    LMFAO x 1000. First of all the Ashley/Kelly/Carrie/Elle coversation was ridiculously funny. The best part was the last two sentences though. i just laughed and laughed... and laughed. The irony was fucking hilarious. Maybe I'm easily amused or maybe my imagination's exceptionally vivd. Maybe I've got the same sense of humor as you or maybe I'm just some crazy who finds hilarity in shit that shouldn't be funny. Either way you never fail to crack me the fuck up.
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  • From ctallent on June 20, 2009
    ha ha they should have known better than to say something in front of elle... great update....
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  • From Violence on June 18, 2009
    ROFLMAO. "Who knew grandma was a bitch?" I couldn't stop laughing at the for quite a while. Little kids are funny like that. WOOHOOOOOO!!!! Marriage proposal! You go get 'em stud. Please, please tell me this means we get an actual wedding scene even though hijinks will most likely ensue.
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  • From greens28 on June 13, 2009
    Glad they are taking a break from the world & brought their family along. Glad to see Kelly's father trying & the stabs at Jason's girlfriend were awesome. Loved it!!!
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  • From ctallent on June 13, 2009
    yay finally, that was was sweet and hilarious poor carrie... elle is the best...
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  • From Violence on June 08, 2009
    Hooker? More like drag queen, lol. Wow, we used to put makeup on my brother all the time... that explains a lot. The family thing with Elle is always cute as hell.
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