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Reviews for Heaven Isn't So Far

By : MiriuOniaya
  • From PyTerato on February 19, 2009
    I think the chapter length is just fine. I understand completely that going to 3k and above can be a pain sometimes. When I started posting fics online, I had this crazy idea that the longer the chapter, the better, so I'd go up to 4-5k each time. I had some chapters up to 7k lol. Suffice it to say, my updates weren't all that steady. Now I have a 2k mark. I write until I hit that mark, and then finish up the scene and theres the chapter. Sometimes it goes to 3k, and sometimes it falls a little short, but it works ^^.

    Anyway, these two chapters were so cute! All their inner turmoil over the kiss and Korbear becoming a nutjob at the end with his crazy hallucinations. It's funny, filled with "awww" moments, and as usual, I love your writing style. You do action tags oh-so-well, and it makes me jealous! It was a pleasure to read, thank you!
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  • From PyTerato on January 14, 2009
    That was totally sweet. Evil Katrella trying to pull a Yoko Ono on the band! How dare she! Well, no I'm glad she dared since her daring lead to two hot guys making out? Anyway, I love your writing style, as usual. There's nothing technical-wise to point out, which is a good thing! I admit, I don't know a thing about the band. I hadn't even heard of them until I read this but Dustin is awfully cute...

    You Rock!

    Hmm too bad all my favourite bands are solo acts... or unslashable... XD Hey, Trent Reznor and David Bowie could always be hooked up, LOL! No, no... I won't. It's your fault I'm thinking like this! Thank you!

    ~C~
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