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Reviews for Good Intentions

By : willjames52
  • From Violence on March 12, 2009
    Aw, damn. Done already. I really enjoyed it though. It was like a really long one-shot. I love where it ends. Kinda ironic too, since Kelly was all up in arms about the bands reaction and then come to find out they were all just waiting for it to happen. Too funny. Hope you decide to do another some day. More stories are always appreciated. Feeds the addiction more frequently, lol.
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  • From classic06 on March 11, 2009
    aww, it's over already? that's a major bummer. i think you did a great job with it, and i'm really glad you wrote it. it was a lot of fun to read, so thank you!
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  • From storyteller999 on March 08, 2009
    Freakin amazing story!!! I vote for long updates and more often.....i know i ask for much...sue me:P:P Great job:D:D:D
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  • From sueage on March 07, 2009
    dude. this fic rocks. but you gotttta update it sooner. i dunno if i can wait a whole other week for the next one, lol. i thought you did a fantastic job capturing the realism between them during this fight and how they were both TALKING but not really LISTENING to what the other one was saying, or taking it in and absorbing it. i think that is one of the biggest communication breakdowns that happens when emotions are high and reason is low, lol. but you did a great job of portraying that, especially when they first started interacting on the doorstep and kelly was pissed that carrie was all cheerful. i thought you captured the frustration and emotion of their fight pretty damn well, too, and it all felt very real. looks like we got a couple of stubborn passionate girls on our hands, eh? lol. should make for some hot make up sex once kelly gets over her fears. ;-) so yea, pretty much am super stoked on this fic and can't wait for more of it.

    oh and about the length, don't even trip, I thought that was a great length for a chapter. but i am totally an impatient person and would rather have shorter chapters that are updated more frequently than super long chapters with a long time in between. at least thats my personal preference. but yea, LOVIN' IT!
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  • From KindlyUnspoken on March 07, 2009
    Oh boy... that was some fight. But I'm kinda glad it happened, the truth needed to come out even if it just furthered the fight. Loved this update and I can't wait for the second part.
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  • From classic06 on March 06, 2009
    so, i have to say, i'm not normally a fan of a lot of description, i'm a dialouge lover, but you write it really, really well. like, perfectly, cause it doesn't get boring or feel like it's dragging on at all which is really hard to do. and the kissing scenes...omg, hot much? lol, so yea, i vote you update this soon cause i absolutely love it.
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  • From greens28 on March 05, 2009
    Hot!!! u are doing a great job. I am really loving where U are taking this...very interesting. Update soon. Please?
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  • From Violence on March 03, 2009
    Ahhhh!! Carrie you dumbass. What were you thinking? It seems as though I'm gonna have to keep my pimp hand strong with these two. But I don't believe Carrie would be that completely idotic and lie to Kelly. Sure, the girl has her moments but she's not THAT stupid... or is she? And to think I was uber excited that they were all makin out. Oh wait, sorry, I'm still happy about it. Just want Carrie to explain. That little bombshell only made me so much more anxious for the next update.
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  • From sueage on March 02, 2009
    ok so i've been meaning to comment on this since you posted the first chapter. i am reallly really liking how this fic started out and how it is shaping up and i can't wait to see what you do with it. i think the AU aspect is totally fun and i am loving the image of carrie as a drummer. hot. i'm totally lovin the interaction between them and damn...you write their kissing really well. the only (minor) problem i had was trying to figure out which one of them was talking during some of their dialogue. but other than that, your descriptions are great, and their conversations are fun and i kinda liked how they both call each other by their last name. oh and i liked the way you traced the necklace and used it as a way to tie in the night with the days following, eventually leading up to kelly remembering what happened between them. i am really anxiously awaiting the next chapter and super curious about what happens when kelly confronts carrie about not telling her they slept together.

    great chapters! loved em both.
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  • From classic06 on February 26, 2009
    LOOVE IT!!! Lol. Seriously great start. I'd say more, but I'm on my iPod, and I'm still trying to figure out how to use the damn thing. LOL. Anyways, I hope you update soon.


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  • From sugar on February 24, 2009

    frogot to mention this:
    "Carrie was smart in ways that she wasn’t. She had barely finished college because she had always been more into music, so school hadn’t been a priority to her. Music was probably the best thing in her life, instead of using her communications degree to find some media related job, she worked at a record store just to be around music when she was away from the band.

    Carrie took all sorts of mathematical classes and did well in them, and while she certainly wouldn’t ever take the courses herself, she found that side of Carrie attractive.°

    and also this:
    "They didn’t always agree on subjects, but that was what made t
    heir conversations fun, getting each other to see both sides. Plus, Carrie could also listen to her complain about her sister, or about some random customer that tried to ask for a record that didn’t exist,"

    great writing!
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  • From sugar on February 23, 2009
    that was damn good!!


    especially this:
    "She loved to tease Kelly about being short, since it was one of the few ways she could flirt with the older girl in front of everyone. Kelly teased her back; there wasn’t a time that went by when she teased Kelly about being short, that Kelly didn’t point out that she was only five-three, not more than a couple inches taller than Kelly. For the most part though, their flirting consisted of lingering glances and amused smiles when the other was caught looking. Their flirting never led to anything serious; however, she was positive that Kelly liked her too. She had subtly asked Kelly out once, and the other girl had said yes before backtracking and turning her down in the kindest way possible, a way that only Kelly could pull off without seeming like a jerk. On more than one occasion when the band had drank together, they had openly flirted, dropped all pretense because of their feelings and the drinks. Carrie thought the problem was the band."



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  • From greens28 on February 22, 2009
    Great start. I like the angle U are using w/ this fic. They aren't famous yet-just both in the same band. I am interested in reading more. Don't stop now-please continue.
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  • From Violence on February 22, 2009
    This is insane. I'm gonna run outta things to say to you people. Not that I'm complaining because I could never object to something this wonderful. Yea, I'm in love with this AU already. 'Cause honestly, the idea of Carrie as drummer is really hot and the fact that Kelly's the lead singer and they're in a band, together. Well it gives me all sorts of happy. Can already tell you're probably gonna be playing with their sexual tension a lot. Hope you continue this though, AU's are fun to read.
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  • From KindlyUnspoken on February 21, 2009
    I really like this so far. I love the whole setting you've created, with the band background and everything. The way you write Kelly and Carrie is very believable, I can picture it in my head. I cannot wait to see how they deal with their feelings and the band. Update soon.
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