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Reviews for Wings to Fly, Eyes that Burn

By : Zilo
  • From ANON - benzoyl on October 13, 2003
    OMFG!!! the suspense is killing me. hope u finish with chapter 16 soon. i hope remy finds marshall fast, i don't want anything bad happening to our cher.

    oh and zilo, love u too :)

    btw, i already have my journal up and going. i hope u could pass by or w/e. it's at livejournal.com/users/benzoyl

    *gives zilo a hug, again*
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  • From ANON - benzoyl on October 08, 2003
    my ever-favorite part in the series is this one:

    ""Y hold y'r guilt like a sickness." Remy's voice didn't match his eyes or his movements. It was roughened and full of compassion. "It starts right here." His fingers pressed into Hailie's smiling face, Marshall flinched at the touch. "An' it spreads." The arm he had pinned across Marshall's chest relaxed and the fingers spread out. "It takes a hold o' y'r heart an' twists it." "

    i dunno, what u're doin to me girl... i keep coming back and i get this anxiety trip when i'm waiting for the next chapter to be posted. that's how good it is. it's like dave matthews's comment on Marshall. he said that Marshall, "grabs my heart really hard and makes me want to get up and scream."

    and that's how it is with me to ur work. u've grabbed my heart. not just with this story but w/ every other story u've posted in this archive. and looks like, it's not just me considering the number of ppl reviewing ur stories and the number of hits its got. u truly aifteifted and i'm so thankful that u're sharing this wonderful talent of yours with us.

    and yes, this latest chapter... it got me again. *hugs zilo*

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  • From ANON - Jenna on October 07, 2003
    "He liked watching his boy's face scrunch up with laughter. His dignity was worth it. "

    Okay, that one broke me. This is so good. I can't wait for what's next.
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  • From ANON - Karen on October 06, 2003
    OMG... I love this story so much but you know what, Zilo? Chapter 14 is definitely my favorite from it all. They've finally poured out their feelings for each other and I'm such a sucker for that. I love the smush that's going on. It gives me this feeling of butterflies.

    This is so beautiful. It simply is. Thank you so much. You totally made my day. *gives zilo a hug*
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  • From ANON - CharlC§ [ on October 03, 2003
    found another link: http://www.urbanplayground.net/~westsyde/02-tupac_ft_notorious_b.i.g.-lp_version-xxl.mp3
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  • From ANON - benzoyl on October 02, 2003
    thanks for the link Charlotte! yep! marshall's a genius. i'm so happy and so goddamn proud of him. im so grateful that I live in a time that has marshall in it. that i can witness his genius firsthand. *sniffs*

    `love u cher. :)

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  • From ANON - benzoyl on October 02, 2003
    oworkwork real fast zilo so don't be sorry. u doing great with the writing. i can't believe how fast u write and it's still good. u're so talented! i really love the 'Cher' nickname. it makes me feel warm and fuzzy all over. and d 3rd image is once again beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Twisted on October 01, 2003
    I just love your stories especially this one. Remy and Marshall have chemistry. I really love your characterization of Marshall on this one. I like an angsty Marshall. I also love Marshall's reluctance at first on having a relationship with Remy to his acceptance. And Remy? I love him, too. He's perfect down to the speech pattern. I just love the way you give dimension to your characters. The way you write really makes this pairing alive for me.

    And in this latest chapter they did it in a medical ward with someone watching them! WOW. That is so hot!!! And Cher??? OMFG!!!

    Keep up the good work Zilo.

    BTW, I also like your 50 cent/Em stories especially Blunts... And yes, you should listen to Dying to Live. I'm already ing ing that song on the radio and it's really good. I cried listening to it. You could almost see Marshall in his studio with his heaphones on. Nodding his head to the bass, eyes closed, with tears in his eyes. He's a genius. Without a doubt.

    To Charlotte: thanks for the link. The first one worked for me. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on September 29, 2003
    first it's Lil M, now it's Cher! I love it!

    here's the link i used to get 'Running (Dying to Li': ':
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/ruffakarodriguezmusic.htm

    i was told that this one works too:
    http://tha.rotten.apple.org.ru/uvz/levi/index.htm

    article bout the song: http://www.mtv.com/news/articles/1479321/20030925/2pac.jhtml?headlines=true

    and yes, i'll say it again, this is just sweet! where's the next chapter? LOL! yes, i'm an impatient bitch ;)
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  • From ANON - charlotte on September 27, 2003
    oh this is just sweet! where's the next chapter honey? can't wait :)

    btw, has anyone out there got that new song with Pac and Biggie on it that Marshall produced? it's called 'Running' and it's hot!!! i wryinrying by the time i finished listening to it. i'm telling y'all, u gotta get it. it's great. u wont believe how good marshall is now with producing.

    and the chorus he chose for the track? shiiiitttt....
    "Why am I fighting to live, if I 'm just living to fight?/ Why am I trying to see, when there ain't nothing in sight?/ Why am I trying to give, when no one gives me a try?/ Why am I dying to live, if I'm just living to die?"

    dios mio... i love that boy.

    anywayz, back to my fb. great story here. beautiful remy and marshall images, too. when's the next chapter coming?
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  • From ANON - benzoyl on September 25, 2003
    aight, i see it now. yeah, those are beautiful. thanks for making and sharing them with us :)
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  • From ANON - Ash on September 24, 2003
    I agree, those are beautiful images. Marshall doesn't have dark hair on the first one. I'm not really complaining though. :) You should create more. It's really beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Ash on September 24, 2003
    I also saw your story at the Slim Slash list. What draw me to it amidst all the other stories is the uniqueness of the pairing. Remy and Marshall? I was like, "How will that work?". But it did and it was a pleasant surprise. I love the story, the setting. I love the characterizations you did for our 2 protagonists and their developing relationship.

    I agree with one of the reviewers. I also do not like stories that are just porn without plot. It's so refreshing to see this original piece among all those.

    You have a beautiful imagination and I would like to thank you for sharing it with us.
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  • From ANON - Karen on September 24, 2003
    Those are beautiful. It's as beautiful as the story itself. I can't believe how talented you are! Really, I can't. Just keep doing what you're doing. It's all good.

    I hope Remy's okay.
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  • From Zilo on September 24, 2003
    sorry. i don't know how to fix the links. if you can't see them still then email me at CelticRose19@aol.com and i'll send them to you.
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