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Reviews for Wings to Fly, Eyes that Burn

By : Zilo
  • From ANON - benzoyl on September 23, 2003
    it's not working for me! i dunno what i'm doing wrong. i need to see this, damn!
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  • From Zilo on September 23, 2003
    hello,
    i just wanted everyone to know that i've created 2 visuals for my story. since remy is a comic book character, i took creative licence with him and his looks. the end result is that he looks an awful lot like johnny depp. anyway i had fun with these and i hope the links works.
    http://www.oddworldz.com/ziloroze/BloodyBoys%20(text).JPG
    and
    http://www.oddworldz.com/ziloroze/RemyMarshBLUE(text).JPG
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  • From ANON - Iris on September 23, 2003
    uhmmm... is Remy sorta saying goodbye to his Lil' M? y'know, it's like, "You gotta be ready bse wse when I'm gone...". Please don't say that it is coz fuck, I can't handle that. that'll be like, too sad. I like this story so much and i don't think i can handle a sad twist (overreacting much?).
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  • From ANON - siobhan on September 23, 2003
    I hate slash stories that are just porn without a plot. Especially if it concerns Marshall. I really hate those. I'm thankful that this story is not like that. I love the development of the characters. I fell in love with Marshall all over again after reading this. This is the first time I've heard of Remy LeBeau and I fell in love with him, too. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - benzoyl on September 22, 2003
    LIL' M.!!! hee! training marshall? admit it remy, u've fallen. fallen hard! he doesn't want anything bad happening to his lil' m *g* remy's so cute. i'm in a fit of giggles!

    where's my smus



    hee!
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  • From ANON - Karen on September 22, 2003
    "*AN: not a very smushy kiss and make up chapter, but no worries, some smush is on the way :) thanks for the feedback karen & benzoyl... it really makes me work more, knowing someone's interested :)"


    --> No problem. You deserve every kudos.

    And Yes, please bring on the smush!

    love, love, LOVE the latest chapter. Remy's forgiven. You should write more. ;)
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  • From ANON - Rosch on September 21, 2003
    saw this on d Em slash list and i was so glad to eadieading something new and original for a change.

    saw ur comment on d latest chapter and i must say, PLEASE bring on the smush! oh and that Friends of Humanity shit? That shit's making me nervous. I hope they don't cause that much fucked up shit on our 2 heroes.

    good job, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Karen on September 18, 2003
    I've been reading this story for some time now and finally I had the guts to write a comment on it. I cannot express enough how much I love this story. I once had this group project and we interviewed inmates. We had the privelege of interviewing a 'punk' and a 'jocker' and I must say that you totally did justice to the characters. I just love Remy and Marshall's growing relationship in this story. It gives me this fuzzy feeling. After reading chapter 9, I do hope that Remy'll make amends.

    Keep up the good work.

    BTW, I was also laughing my ass off on Marshall being too ADD to read. I remembered this interview where someone said that Marshall's mom put Marshall on Ritalin because she thought he was.

    I can't wait for the next installment to this story.


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  • From ANON - benzoyl on September 16, 2003
    woohooo! chapter 9 already! can't stop reading this ish. MORE please *kneels and pleads*

    and as for Remy? bastard! he needs his empath powers back. for sure. :)

    again, MORE PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - benzoyl on September 14, 2003
    just wanna say that this story is probably d best i've read in... well... months! for r i i luv d build up of this story. d suspense is really killing me. oh and, em and gambit? sheer genius. u fuckin rock, zilo! keep it up. cant wait to see what'll happen next. don't keep us hanging that long, ok?
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  • From ANON - poldebs on September 12, 2003
    i'm so excited to see that you've added another chapter to this series. I think you're a good writer and I love reading all your stories especially this one on Remy and Marshall. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
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  • From ANON - hey on August 17, 2003
    goob! ob! i hope you write more soon

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  • From ANON - Erik on August 02, 2003
    This is such a creative idea! Even better that the fic is well-written and coherent, with good character development. I only recently got into Eminem slash, but Remy from X-Men has been a favourite for a long time, and seeing the two paired (right?) is just so exciting. :)

    I'm hoping to see much more of this!
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