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January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*bounces* the martians have landed! (cough...sorry)
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ILOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! please if its tbc.....continue continue *offers chocolate*
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ILOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! please if its tbc.....continue continue *offers chocolate*
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December 8, 2002 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far. I saw a few grammatical errors, but a beta reader could help you with that.
Please continue this story. I'd very much like to read more.
Please continue this story. I'd very much like to read more.
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December 6, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Well... quite interesting for a first fanfiction :) Dialogues are witty, although whole plot of the story is pretty blurry and simple.