It's downyou4you | By : Nefertari Category: Singers/Bands/Musicians > Savage Garden Views: 1042 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. I do not know the members of Savage Garden. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
Disclaimer:
I don’t own neither Darren nor Daniel. They belong to themselves or they boy/girfriends, whatever they like to have. This is pure fiction coming blurring out of my fingers. I don’t make any money with it. If you want to sue me alright, but since I am a poor student this would be total madness.
Now for the rating:
PG-13 the first chapter for the m/m theme and will change to NC 17 most likely in the following chapters.
This is my first fanfiction ever, so don’t hit me to hard. I know it’s all been said and done before but I love this first time stories. Have fun...
Please review that one, so that I know if it's total crap or at reada
1.
Daniel was sitting on a chair beneath the window staring out of the window. It was raining and the roaring sound of thunder far away could be heard. It didn’t matter to him because the weather was just mirroring his emotions. They had been touring for over four months and frankly he couldn’t stand it anymore. The travelling, the hotel rooms, the strafoodfood, the closeness to his band mates. His band mates, of course this included him. Being close to Darren was maybe the strongest reason for him being so moody lately.
*‘Why did he have to give in when the band tried to convince him in this one last tour? It had been a bad idea but he never was the one to resist Darren pleading eyes. What was he thinking? He had never been the one to resist Darren at all. If only he was feeling the same way. If only Darren hadn’t been straight then I might have the chance to show him how much I...but no this will never happen because Darren isn’t in love with you. Well, he loves you yes, but not the way you love him. God only knows what he would do if he knew you were not the straight man you always pretend you are.‘*
Daniel continued wailing in his thoughts about his unrequitted love, when suddenly hands were covering his eyes.“Guess, who is it?“ Daniel heard a giggling voice speaking.‘Umm, well since the front door is closed and a person called Darren owns the adjoining hotel room, I guess it might be this horrible person Darren.‘ Daniel answered with a smile. ‘Ah, damn Jonesy, you spoilt all my fun.‘Darren pouted. *This pout will be my death one day.* ‘And just how did I have to reply when you’re scaring the shit out of me, Dozer?‘ ‘Sorry Jonesy it was just too inviting and you seemed to be so oblivious to the rest of the world. What are you up to lately and don’t tell me it’s just you being homesick or something.‘
*Oh god, he has realized something. Ah, Dan ya fool, of cours has has, it’s not that you’re not acting obvious about it. Okay, maybe you can ...*
‘Well, Mr. Hayes since you insinst on it I will tell you what is wrong‘ Daniel said with his deep voice, slowly rising out of his chair giving Darren a steely look. Darren shifted unconfortably under Daniel’s gaze not knowing what to do. ‘I have to inform you Mr. Hayes, that yourend,end, Mr. Jones had been kidnapped by aliens from the planet of Utopia and I have been chosen to replace him on Planet Earth‘ Daniel said with a most serious voice.
Darren‘s look faded from deep concern into highly amused one in a flash and he seemed to consent to the game Daniel wanted to play. ‘Kidnapped by aliens, aw, my poor Jonesy. Is there anything I can do to redeem him as a prisoner?‘ Darren asked while moving forward in a very seductively way *Cum on Jones, get a grip he’s not into that stuff with other men*. Daniel answered with a slightly struggling voice ‘Hmmm, we thought that the ransom should be an amount of four bars of dark chocolate.‘ ‘Just four bars?‘ Darren yelled in mocked irateness. ‘He’s not worth more to you than four bars of dark chocolate?‘. Daniel knew he shouldn’t push his luck by asking the question which entered his mind but it slipped out almost automatically. ‚So what *is* Mr. Jones worth to you, Mr. Hayes?
Daniel could see Darren flinch back at the question and swallow hard before he finally met Daniel’s gaze again. ‘I...I would give everything for my D... ahem for him.‘ Now it was Daniel’s turn to swallow hard. *Oh, fuck, what do I reply to him and hold on, did he want to say *my* Daniel?*Daniel thought it took himself an hour to reply to Darrens question.*How could this little game shift into something so dangerous so quickly* ‘So you would give everything just to see him save. Well, what includes everything for you, Mr. Hayes?‘ Daniel could merely hold his gaze now and his cheeks were flushed bright red, btrantrangely this was not what happened with Darren. In fact, the more insecure Daniel got, Darren got bolder with each move they made in Daniel’s hotel room. ‘That Mr. Alien, is down to you and you only...what do you want?‘ Darren had moved towards Daniel while asking that final question and was now only inches apart from Daniel’s slightly writhing . He. He looked at him confident almost a little defiant.
*Oh Jesus, what is happening here, is he really offer what I think he is offering? If not then why is he being so cheeky all of a sudden and in such a way, almost, no definetly sexy way.* Daniel’s head was spinning now. He was so confused right now that he nearly missed that Darren repeated his question from before. ’So what do you really want me to do?’ *Lying naked on that bed, screaming out my name, while I fuck senssenseless is not on the option list, I suppose. Get a grip Danny. Calm down, he’s just playing. He doesn’t realize how much this affects you.* But before he knew what happened he demanded ‘Kiss me!’
*Oh god, did I really said that out loud?* Daniel did not come farther with his toughts because he found Darren’s lips on his own.*I did say that out loud.* Then it hit him straight in the face. He said that out loud and Darren didn’t back away. In fact, he kissed him. Or to be more precise was still kissing him. When he realiseis Dis Daniel started to return the kiss in a hungry passion that he never believed he could show Darren. After a few moments they both had to break the more and more heated kiss because of a mutual lack of air. Daniel could hear Darren softly chuckle. ‘So this is what you wanted. You only had to ask’ Darren sighed happily before he pushed his tongue into Daniels now open mouth. Daniel couldn’t help himself and just melted into that kiss he had wanted for such a long time but he had to break the kiss because he desperately needed to know something.
“Darren, so you know what I want but... I really need to know what you want’ Daniel asked with a questioning gaze. ‘I thought we already figured that out’ Darrien replied with a cheeky, happy grin on his face ‘You got the kiss and get my Danny!’*Oh God, what was that song ‘Thought I died and gone to heaven’ yes that is exactly how I feel. He definetelid mid my Danny. Woo hoo* ‘Done, it’s a deal he’s all yours and happy about it.’ They ended up again in a rough kiss, pulling at each others lips and tasting each other until Daniel couldn’t take it anymore he pushed his hips into Darren's harder and harder and then positioned himself with one of his legs between Daz's thighs. Darren began to moan desperatly. ‘Danny...oh Danny... This can’t be real, I’ve wanted you.. for so long....please Danny, please...!’ Daniel struggled with himself until he could break the kiss. He looked into Darren’s eyes and said ‘I think we should take this very interesting discussion to a more comfortable place. Maybe my bed or something. What do you say Darren darling?’ Daniel asked with a broad smile. ‘But of course Danny, you know I’m all yours soul and body’ Darren replied with a wink.
And this was all encouragement Daniel needed to take their relationship to the last unknown land
TBC...
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