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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I like the way it's moving along thus fare. . . .and I'm curious about what happened to Kellie's previous boyfriend, how she got the scare. . . .and what Orli does about Kate.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you updating soon?
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You should definatly continue this story. Orlando is just such a scrumtious little hotty? Gods, I could just eat all up! Anyway....Hurry and continue.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa!!!! loved how you did the sex! not too explicit and not to dull either. hope you continue with this story line. would like to see more of it. update soon!!!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I love it, I only wish that it was me with him!!!!!
Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no,no,no.!!!! don't tell us he is going to go back to her! hopefully it is his dog he wants her to meet or a good friend or any one else but her!!!!!!! don't take to long to update!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a good story I can't wait for what happens next
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
liked the story, loved the brat pack, they were funny and instead of having her get mad and stomp out, you had her enjoy herself and finally the kissing was just "great"!!!!! stopping himself before it got out of hand, hurray for that part!!!!! it makes it all the sweeter! just continue please and update as soon as you can!!!!!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like where you are going with this story! its nice to see a relationship first insted of ripping each others clothes off and having at it. Please do continue this story. nice to see a good story line and you have written it well. update soon!!!!!