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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this!
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was brilliant! I've never read a celebfic so good! You created a very romantic take and made it seem like a real story! Well done
Just one bit of constructive criticism, you need to paragraph the story and have a seperate line for each person speaking and it would help if you seperated the chapters as to make it easier to read but well done anyway!
Just one bit of constructive criticism, you need to paragraph the story and have a seperate line for each person speaking and it would help if you seperated the chapters as to make it easier to read but well done anyway!