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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay now we're getting somewhere VAM LOVE MUST COME SOON lols good job man nice chapter please keep going
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome as usual my darling!!! you're so talented, i'm lucky to know you and to be your beta, i'll talk to you soon honey and i cant wait to read the next chapter!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw tht was cute....more!!! update!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter, I thought the amount of Vam was pretty appropriate considering as you said they're not even friends yet XD
Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next Chapter ^___^
<3
Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next Chapter ^___^
<3
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*clapclapclap* I still love you, no matter how bad your grammar is! <3
Heh. That made me happy. I don't really have any sigestions, other than having, at some point, Ville be the only think keeping Bam alive (for reasons which Bam cannot point out yet exactly.) I don't know how but... hmm... Maybe a bad dream, a cold night, and Bam staring out over the ocean thinking of drowning himself. He could wade into the water and almost do it, but hear Ville's vioce in his head telling him not to. Then he'd go back to the boat, and lay down next to Ville, who would wraps his arms unconciously around Bam. Then wake up and mumble something about being wet and hug Bam tighter.
I DON'T KNOW! I've never won any Plot Awards, so don't listen to me. :D
Still, love where it's going. Keep it up, darling!
-x-Valo
Heh. That made me happy. I don't really have any sigestions, other than having, at some point, Ville be the only think keeping Bam alive (for reasons which Bam cannot point out yet exactly.) I don't know how but... hmm... Maybe a bad dream, a cold night, and Bam staring out over the ocean thinking of drowning himself. He could wade into the water and almost do it, but hear Ville's vioce in his head telling him not to. Then he'd go back to the boat, and lay down next to Ville, who would wraps his arms unconciously around Bam. Then wake up and mumble something about being wet and hug Bam tighter.
I DON'T KNOW! I've never won any Plot Awards, so don't listen to me. :D
Still, love where it's going. Keep it up, darling!
-x-Valo
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're my biggest fan?! it should be the other way around as you have lots more talent than me darling. i love all your work and i know that this story is just gonna get better and better!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The idea alone was………repulsive, yeah that was what it was…….repulsive." Yeaaaah, just kee thinking that, Ville. See where it gets you.
Annnnnnnnyway... YAY! I loved that chapter. I really did. *bakes muffins*
he only thing that bugged me at all, was that some of the words didn't make sense... I don't remember an exactly, but something along the lines of "It was he only pair of pants." (as an example.) something that messed up with the spell check... Wow, I'm scaring myself! Slap me before I start begging to double beta your grammar. o_O;
No, that was not an insult! I LOVE YOU!!! You know that. I shouldn't have to say it.
-x-Valo (As much a Karin fan as a Ville fan.)
Annnnnnnnyway... YAY! I loved that chapter. I really did. *bakes muffins*
he only thing that bugged me at all, was that some of the words didn't make sense... I don't remember an exactly, but something along the lines of "It was he only pair of pants." (as an example.) something that messed up with the spell check... Wow, I'm scaring myself! Slap me before I start begging to double beta your grammar. o_O;
No, that was not an insult! I LOVE YOU!!! You know that. I shouldn't have to say it.
-x-Valo (As much a Karin fan as a Ville fan.)
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, The mix of the two will be interesting...
Great work, Can't wait for the next Chapter!
Great work, Can't wait for the next Chapter!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I'm totally addicted to this fic! Can't wait 'til you update!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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Excellent update!
I loved it!
Excellent update!
I loved it!