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Reviews for The War (In The Beginning)

By : pensfan100
  • From ANON - Caz on May 15, 2005
    Ack!! Didn't realise there was another chapter waiting for me to devour!!! And hell, what a chapter!!! I swear, no one can write sex like you, Bonnie, thank God!
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  • From ANON - Stag on May 13, 2005
    God, one has got to love Hayden being insanely jealous. I know I do. *salivates*
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  • From ANON - anon on May 12, 2005
    Yay! Another chapter! Thanks so much for writing this story - I love their obsessive relationship. You just need to let Natalie ditch Michael finally (although it looks as though it may be coming up soon). Have a fun vacation and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - pensfan100 on May 03, 2005
    Trust me, Natalie will be looking for Hayden the next day, afraid that he might have spent the night with 'the groper.' LOL. Glad you liked the chapter and I hope I can get it out by the 20th cos I'm leaving for Florida on the 12th and won't be back until the 23rd! As for what happens in the next chapter...I am sure the physical side of their relationship will erupt. It's all tied up in their emotions and they also haven't been together for over a week, so you can bet something will happen. I'll do my best to make it better. LOL. Thanks everyone for posting feedback! It's a great way to get me to write more!
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  • From ANON - Caz on May 03, 2005
    Awww! ::sniffle:: coe on, Bonnie, make it better. Make it HEAPS better :D
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  • From ANON - Ali on May 03, 2005
    Wow... Wow... Geez... I hate her! hehe. You should have your next update on the 20th (if not before). A new chapter of this story would be the best birthday gift someone could give me. Do we get nookie in the next chapter?? Well, keep doing a good job...
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  • From ANON - Caz on May 02, 2005
    Looking forward to it already, Bonnie :D
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  • From ANON - pensfan100 on May 01, 2005
    Please bear with me! I am into writing the next chapter, but I have been getting called to substitute teach a LOT and haven't been able to devote a lot of time to writing. I am going to try and get more done tomorrow. I know what happens next, it's just the matter of actually getting a chance to sit down, uninterrupted, and get it down. I'll try to get it done this week.

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  • From ANON - vader\'s slave on April 28, 2005
    I love this fic. Are you going to update soon? I need closure here. It's been more than two weeks. *whine* Can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From ANON - Ali on April 26, 2005
    UPDATE THIS SOON!! I need my drug! Hehe... This is really good. Just a little advice you're making it seem like HAyden has gone soft. I hope you plan to bring him back full force. I can't wait for you to update this...
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  • From ANON - Joe C on April 20, 2005
    More! More! This is excellent! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Monkey on April 18, 2005
    This story is so powerful. I only hope it ends happily! Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - stag on April 15, 2005
    *whimpers* update?
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  • From ANON - Caz on April 13, 2005
    LOLOLOL! What number is the next round, Bonnie?? LOLOL! That, my dear, was bloody superb. So good that you brought tears to my eyes, and I wish you'd made Natalie do the same too. There must have been tears for the amount of pain in that amazing f***. Brilliant stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    p.s. thanks for the plug :D
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  • From ANON - Stag on April 13, 2005
    God, you gotta love it when Hayden is sexily up to something. *waits for next chappy*
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