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Reviews for The War (In The Beginning)

By : pensfan100
  • From ANON - vader\'s slave on April 12, 2005
    Hooboy! I need a cold shower! That was so hot. Who knew Natalie had it in her? (no pun intended) :P Awesome chapter, Pensfan. I can't wait to see what Hayden has in store for Nat. The angst, the drama.....the hot sex! LOL You are definitely one of the best erotic fiction writers I've come across online. I wish I could write sex the way you do. Any chance you'll write a Vader/Padme fic in the future? I'd love to read what you'd do with those two particular characters.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on April 11, 2005
    Yay, another chapter! Of course, now you've left us hanging to see how Natalie will get her revenge. Loving this story - please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Monkey on April 06, 2005
    WHOA!!! Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. It's so dark and boardering on scary but it's still HOT! Thanks!!
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  • From ANON - Stag on April 05, 2005
    hehe, "Heaven"... I swear, when they casted Jude Law as her love interest in Closer, I could not help but think how right she looked with curly haired, blonde males with dark blue eyes... But she looks best with Hayden. Seriously, Jude Law is hot but Natalie is reserved for Hayden. :)
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  • From ANON - Caz on April 04, 2005
    Oh, Man!! Can't wait for payback day!! LOLOL! Good to see another fabulous chapter of this Bonnie. Superb piece of action :D
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  • From ANON - Ali on April 02, 2005
    It is quite about time you update this! I cannot wait for the second part. I love this story, one of your greatest if I do say so myself. Hurry with the second part, please...
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  • From ANON - pensfan100 on March 31, 2005
    Sorry this is taking so long. I am halfway through the next chapter but Real Life has interfered! Please hang on and I'll try and get it done. If I'm not interrupted and called out to work tomorrow I just may have it finished before midnight tomorrow night. I apologize profusely! I hate it when I get left hanging and I am sure that is how all of you are feeling right about now.
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  • From ANON - Stag on March 28, 2005
    Wee! Update please! :)
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  • From ANON - vader\'s slave on March 27, 2005
    Okay. I've just read this fic over again for the tenth time.....at least! I really need an update. This fic is too good to let it die. So when can we expect an update? Hayden and Natalie have been in that shower for ages. LOL
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  • From ANON - Ali on March 01, 2005
    Thankyou for the reply, Bonnie. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter! When will you put it up? Hopefully soon. Is there any way that you could email me the chapters that you do have done of "You still can't control Destiny" ? Anyway, thankyou for all the stories you do write. They are amazing...
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  • From ANON - pensfan100 on February 23, 2005
    Ali, I promise Hayden is not going to go soft. In fact, in the next chapter Bad Hayden is back and he is going to take matters into his own hands when he gets ticked off about something. However, she is going to give it right back to him later and while he won't go soft, he will enjoy every agonizing moment. As for You Still Can't Control Destiny...I never finished it and if I post it others will be after me to finish it! And I will feel really bad that it may be a long time before I get back to it!
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  • From ANON - Ali on February 23, 2005
    This is very good, but you know that I have loved it so far. I think you are starting to rush it a little bit, though. I feel it's like after chapter six Hayden has gone soft. Bring the bad boy back. He's so hot as the bad boy, I swear... Anyhow, update! I would love you forever and ever if you posted the sequel to You still can't control destiny!! PLEASE!! Or at least give a link in the next chapter to it, or something. Everyone would love that story so much. I love the game they were playing in that story. He says something about that it won't be a problem because she got herself a canadian... Hehe... Loved it!


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  • From ANON - Caz on February 15, 2005
    Now that, is S.E.X. in the best use of the word. Superb chapter, Bonnie. You truly are the master at writing these scenario's. Eager for the next bit - but not so long though, please!!! you kill me with the waiting :D
    p.s. Thank you sooo much for the reviews on mine. You have no idea how much they meant to me :D
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  • From ANON - Monkey on February 14, 2005
    YAY!! Thank you so much for the update. I could use a cold shower myself now!
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  • From ANON - Ali on February 09, 2005
    Bonnie, I hate it when you make me complain. This story has to be updated again, okay???!?!?!!? I'm going through withdrawl symtons. It's horrible. There aew some stories you have uncompleted but this story, you can't just leave it like this. It's captivated me. PKEASE update it????

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