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Reviews for The War (In The Beginning)

By : pensfan100
  • From ANON - Caz on January 21, 2005
    Yes! Chuffed to bits to find another chapter. And what a chapter. Sheesh! Love all the heated tension. I can't wait for 'tomorrow' either :D
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  • From ANON - Ali on January 20, 2005
    I absoulutely love this story. I really do. You really have to update this more often. You also should post the sequel to You can't control destiny. Now that is a hot story, the whole them playing a game and him leaving his own bachelor party. Love that story. Hell, I love all of your stories. Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - vader\'s slave on January 19, 2005
    Um....Wow! If that's how good you are when rusty I can't wait to see what you write when you're on a roll. LOL I wouldn't change a thing about this chapter. It was really hot. I adore how you write Hayden. He's so confident. He smolders. *drool* Natalie doesn't stand a chance, poor girl.
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  • From ANON - Terren on January 19, 2005
    YAY!!! An update. Thank you, thank you.
    Your writing didnt seem rusty to me.
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  • From ANON - Monkey on January 18, 2005
    I am DESPERATELY waiting for tomorrow!!!
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  • From ANON - Ali on January 17, 2005
    Why the HELL haven't you updated this story?!?!?!? It needs to be updated. I don't think rhat you quite understand that. Really. It's my opinion that trouble should come up for them such as NAtalie not wanting to break up with her boyfriend and Hayden being a little less than happy about it. And, well, I know that you know here you could take it from there. Please update this! I am BEGGING you!!
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  • From ANON - vader\'s slave on January 03, 2005
    please update? pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Nemesis27 on December 19, 2004
    This is such a good story! It's unbelieavably hot, good characterisation, good dialogue, amazing descriptions. Please continue, I can't wait for thze next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Terren on December 16, 2004
    Your stories are brilliant. Please update!!
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  • From ANON - Monkey on December 09, 2004
    SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!! Thanks so much for the update!! i will endevor to be patient while waiting for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Caz on December 09, 2004
    Oh yes! Great ending to this one. Nothing like a bit of blunt talking to ram things home. Great stuff. Already eager for next chapter...
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  • From ANON - vader\'s slave on December 07, 2004
    Pensfan.....once again a truly hot H/N fic. I hope this one is longer than the last one. It was so good but too short. I was left wanting more more more. LOL Can't wait to read what's in store for H/N in this story. *patiently waits for new chappie*
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  • From ANON - Caz on December 03, 2004
    God, it was good to see another story from you. I ADOARE the way you write sex. Can't fault it. Want more. Lots more.
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  • From ANON - Monkey on November 29, 2004
    HOT HOT HOT!!! You always blow my mind!! I love Hayden and Natalie together and you make them incredible.
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  • From ANON - Hayden&Natalie on November 23, 2004
    JEE UR the best!! it's been a month since the last one.. and of course ur work is again marvellous.. But plz update sooner.. im dying to read your work pensfan100
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